we read the book timber and then we planed it and then we made and argument here about the book timber.
I learned that cutting trees is a bad idea because if you cu the trees we will die. and we will have know oxygen. it was hard because I never went to the teacher for help so now I know when you need help there
is your friends.
please leave a postie thoughtful,helpful comment to help move forwards with my learning.
some people lie birds eg me but my little pet bird chewchew got killed from that tree.
ReplyDeletehi angle i like the way you used your green book and i like the way you used your plan that you done.
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Thanks jody just that maybe next time you can spell my name right please it is Angel not angle. thanks from Angel
DeleteHi i'm Nevaeh, From Waikowhai Primary School. I liked how you want to make people stop cutting trees down because we will lose oxygen and I also think we should stop cutting trees. At our school we are learning about the environment as well so I think your piece of writing is wonderful. But next time you could edit your work a bit more for spelling and just to make sure it make scene so other people can read it better.
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