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Wednesday 8 November 2017

IALT: Write about my family.

1st  we started by planing.

2nd  we wrote what was in my plan into sentences. 

3rd  we started writing  sentences into paragraphs. 




i learnt that if you start from a paragraph then your life will be much easy. :)

I think what was hard for me was that wen I had to write plans because i didn't really have much ideas then sally gave me some ideas so then i came up with so much ideas I was about to explode.  

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Angel,

    Good work on well structured paragraphs, it looks as though you were able to expand on a lot of ideas, and I'm glad you didn't explode. Māori is a beautiful culture and I'm glad that you have a positive identification to it. Do you know much about any other cultures?

    Ka pai kare!

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