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Friday 24 November 2017

IALT:write about challanges


the first step that we took was when i was  planning   about things then i came up with the idea of not seeing my mum.

and out of that i learned that its ok to tell people how you feel

what was hard was that i really needed help but couldn't because i didn't what to tell people about what is going on o my life.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Angel,

    Wow, it is a really brave thing to write about something to personal to you. I live far away from my mum as well and, although I am a grown up, it is really hard to be so far away sometimes. I think it's the hugs I miss the most. :)

    Your writing has improved so drastically in the last few months as well and I am really proud of you. I can see your paragraphs are clear groupings of ideas and you have topic sentences.

    Well done, Girl!

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